Spectrogram Of A Pictorial Poem (Translation By Prof. Ghulam Jilani Asghar Comments

It´s been a long time... I´ve missed your poems! And then, I´ve hit this beautiful one. For the existencialist death makes life senseless, for the believer death grants us the opportunity to face eternity... As always, Good in-depth poems... obed R. Souza

Death is reduced to a worn out cliché ...very well penned.Thanks for sharing..

Well written....some really good lines... a nice length but not too long.

I believe spectre was a limited company that wanted to waste all the world in a movie with 007, could we do its spectrogram? Mr. Nasir seems to have done it, good.

''failure to compose a poem is not a tragedy of the poet''................ great words..........thanks for inviting me to read it......10/10

a very good poem, thanks for showing it to me.

good right..good flow nicely done

'Death is reduced to a worn out cliche'- a concise understanding of perpetual death. Thought provoking metaphors - good write.

quite dark...deep and mind provoking.....

I vote for this wonderful peice, its amazing and lovely

good flow - reasons well, well done! i vote for it!

Vivid imagery, beautiful feel, wonderful flow. One word, Amazing. Good Job Naseer, a beautiful work of art.10/10

a niece piece! Winnie

Lovely poem Naseer! I love the way how this poem flows!

such a beautiful poem can only come from your pen

very good naseer! thats 112!

this is a beautiful poem i really like it

i read it and find it good. shan

wooooow its reallly deep, i love it alots of strong word its reallly amazing

Hello Nasir, you write so truth in poetic form could feel through your words its awesome and beautifully scripted its really good thank you for sharing your poem