Friday, September 6, 2019

Speck (And I Am Born) Comments

Rating: 5.0

"You are not a drop in the ocean.
You are the entire ocean, in a drop."
~ Rumi
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Linda Marie Van Tassell
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 September 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Linda Marie. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 September 2019

Sway (from myth to moor) until you touch the broken rune. Scatter (length and lore) and let it rain to quell the moon... very fine exoressions of a thinking mind.. like your poems. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 September 2019

This is a classy quatrain, dear Ma’am Linda...10++

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Gajanan Mishra 06 September 2019

Entire ocean, life and dream

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Julia Luber 06 September 2019

I like how you've used an orchestration of repetition and rhyme to create a very musical poem that works right on the mind too as to what it is about. Very poetic and musical.

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Lynchburg, Virginia
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