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Please give me my ignorance back. Ego and conditioning wish to hold back ignorance wrapped in familiarity. An intriguing write.

My face with an ugly scar That had eaten deep and deep Into my sinking self-esteem And made me suffer misery Was no more there for me to see Truly said, Great write,

The poem coming from the commitment to the surroundings that live and the poet had taken the theme showing his regard to humans and humanity and it is so great.

Ignorance is bliss. Beautifully stressed in the poem. Humility is to be developed and not the boast of I. Thank you for sharing another nice poem.

As long as we are bound by the iron chains of 'I' and 'mine', there is no liberation for man! To him 'the grass is always greener on the other side'! Never he is in a position to enjoy his existing state nor a higher state! Sadly he is fated to live, nursing his wounds! Enjoyed this deeply philosophical poem that gives newer insights and cognizance!

I completely loved your poem! ! The depth, insight, knowledge and creativity delighted me. Thank you very much for sharing. Peace.