Thursday, June 17, 2004

Special Daughter Comments

Rating: 4.1

You always bring me that special joy
That comes from deep inside
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ANGELICA MACHADO
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Sandra Osborne 03 March 2005

the first stanza was very good, the second good, but add thge word 'not' in the second line. The third stanza seemed a bit short and I thought you might lengthen it. Stiil a good piece and I liked the change in style.

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ANGELICA MACHADO

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