the first stanza was very good, the second good, but add thge word 'not' in the second line. The third stanza seemed a bit short and I thought you might lengthen it. Stiil a good piece and I liked the change in style.
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the first stanza was very good, the second good, but add thge word 'not' in the second line. The third stanza seemed a bit short and I thought you might lengthen it. Stiil a good piece and I liked the change in style.