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A lover you are with an amazing style to care
Your skin is magic, a dream come true, so sexy when bare
I loved your heartbeat in ecstasy, pounding with pleasure
Making love with you was an endless, complete giving treasure
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Very good. I enjoyed your sense of rhythm and comparisons. The only thing I would suggest is using stanzas in this to separate it a bit more. Very good poem.
i must come back.. too read more words... and find the time too rhyme and fly as too one bird...iip
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8/18/2025 10:25:05 AM # 1.0.0
Hi Debbie - You are an excellent poet in terms of Structure - each verse a perfect quatrain - Rhyme an aabb ccdd etc pattern throughout - Rhythm it flows like a Mountain Stream! I am a classical poet and this is a classical poem - I give it TEN for structure. Love you in Poetry JOHN.