Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Speaks Positively Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to pull your hair out, scream and shout
Bruise your bones and let the blood flow out

I want to crush your head and cut your skin
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Sara Tehrani
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Beauty Philosophy 17 August 2009

A nice poem stemming from your heart.

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Mona Martinez 11 August 2009

wow. that was amazing poem, i enjoyed reading it. so full of exitciment.

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L.P. Alexanders 16 June 2009

i think that the persona speaks honestly about his/her disagreement with the person whom the poem is addressed, and instructively about what that person has to change to be a better person= speaks positively, am i right? great piece of work keep writing!

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