Monday, May 12, 2008

Speak To Me Then Comments

Rating: 5.0

Speak to me, then, softly and low
Speak to me about all the places that you've known
Tell me about your life and why
Your eyes, your hands, your face
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Rani Turton
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 22 May 2008

so beautiful and touching *10*

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Broken Peaces 15 May 2008

Your words are penned by an overflowing heart feeling ouses from every pore of your body and into your pen, dream write Chris x

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Onelia Avelar 13 May 2008

Your words are flowing and the poem is wonderfully penned...The first appealing stanca is memorable 'speak to me then softly and low'...and promising secrets to be told later on...

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Abha Sharma 13 May 2008

Yearning for the memories and closeness through words of experience of the near ones… The lines show the mixed feeling of patience, loss, love and excitement… Well composed stanzas, cohered by 'Speak to me” **Abha**

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