Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, August 20, 2014

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I shall openly embrace
With smile on face
Arms so wide and open
I shall make it heaven
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2014

Interesting Jeff Stricklin7 minutes ago interesting Comment +1 .

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2014

Speak About Love Michelle Jones4 minutes ago I feel like you let auto correct do too much, there are a few words, I am not sure if you meant them or words very similar in spelling and speaking, but with very different meanings. I like the direction you take with this poem, but feel as though you shy away from bigger words, that may actually help get your message across. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago simple man with simple ideas dear reader..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2014

Yann Ehj likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2014

I shall openly embrace With smile on face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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