Hi runrun... what I like about this poem is that you speak in your own voice. No pretension here. Oh and I also like what you have to say. It reminds me of the song, True Colours... If you left out the last two lines I believe the poem will improve (but it's your poem, ignore me if you think I'm wrong.) A last thing, I never rate poems, though others will!
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Hi runrun... what I like about this poem is that you speak in your own voice. No pretension here. Oh and I also like what you have to say. It reminds me of the song, True Colours... If you left out the last two lines I believe the poem will improve (but it's your poem, ignore me if you think I'm wrong.) A last thing, I never rate poems, though others will!