Spastic At The Beach Comments

I can't get past the derogatory title. I prefer Mal McKimmie's response 'Spastic poet at the beach (after Luke Davies) '.

i must admit i nearly didnt read this (being as i see it socially aware) and doubting this piece by the title.... but im so glad i did... it is beautiful, it is so compassionate to me, so reflective and as with the other two poems i have just read the descriptive skills are so imaginative and second to none...tyvm karen