Tuesday, January 17, 2006

Sparrows Of Light! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sparrows of lucite while being lost in
flight...Resembles a star-man diffused
dully of the light-not too smart or bright.
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Michael Gale
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MIKE...STELLAR WRITE...GOOD FLOW...NICE& TIGHT...IMAGES IN BLOOM...10.MY GOOD FRIEND'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Emma Johnson 26 March 2006

This is a poem with sound effects. The dominant /t/ sound which rhymes with the /t/ of the title is brilliantly employed. The imagery is beautiful. Susie.

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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