Sparky Comments

Full of feeling, very well written. The compassionate shot, always giving us some guilt but the best of things we could choose. I think this is a very good poem

Wow...seriously, and I'm not just saying this 'by the by'...This is Superb! ! ! so emotional and sensational! ! ! ! You have perfect things in you needed to be a great poet. loved it! ! so sad and heartbreaking... Keep it up! ! 10/10 all the way! btw, read mine if you want!