kindness and care redound to swoon
sky in its vastness frilling blue blue
heart spruces up by thrills of white
as red enshrines deep by glow of hope
...
Read full text
wow Dr shubendho great choice.and good tink, write god so nice your poem: thumb: : +: thumb:
Your unique yet classical style of writing is absolutely beautiful. The poem just wraps you in warm arms and leaves you floating in a sea of pleasure. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
This piece is full of movement. Your words are simply delicious. The way you presented this piece reminds me of the beauty that is bestowed in all of us. When humanity stops to care then poetry such as yours will wither and die. Thanks for master-crafting each line to show us the beauty in all of us! Humanity Rocks! ! !
rom : Judy Meibach (New York United States; Female; 49) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 7/12/2010 9: 44: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: invitation, The poem Sparks in Dew was really good - I liked your choice of words - your usage of the colors and the descriptions - I was just curious why you started each stanza with a lower case letter.
[Rigidity in skin...] Great piece of poetry, its contrast and moving themes makes it totally beautiful. Great poem
From : Almedia Knight (Brooklyn United States; Female; 75) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 7/9/2010 8: 20: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Thank you so much for your kind remarks...m comments confirm my appreciation for your work. I will continue to write as long as blood flows warm in my veins...I know you'll do the same for we are poets and our work is tranfused into the veins of those who come after us. Regards Almedia
Usually people look at wats n front of them but u look everywhere: ]
'...humanity is lost in crowd of cruels yet love whispers milling through snow...' when the mind tunes itself to the thought...actions result in culmination of letters into words........con tinues.......poetry flows.... - Masterpiece Dr.Peddi
Indeed sparks in the dew light up this poem in a poetic feast of words well done regards
Indeed sparks in the dew light up this poem in a poetic feast of words well done regards
humanity is lost in crowd of cruels yet love whispers milling through snow night when remembers grace of silence A cool and tranquil flavour of poetic mind overwhelmes the readers liking. Imagery runs like a black snake with a hissing sound through the vision. Cool but coolness doesn't push the conscious back. It pulls toward a silent dawn where sparkles the dew at the tip of a little grass. Where glimpses of love peeping through with a refraction of rainbow light. Well written poem where humanity remains bright in the crowd of cruels. Thank you for such an excellent open-gift to the readers. Write more and live long. Regards, 10+ pranab
Beautiful imagery created by your choice of words here, I agree with previous comments, the poem title is wonderful and is a precursor to the contents of it :)
The Beauty not only lay on this poem but plays as in Own Home! Lovely to read,10.
Ammmmazing imagery........compact powerful diction........truly poetic expressions!
sparks of dew.. a very expressive and well worded poem. i enjoyed reading it. peace and serenity always
sparkly dew touching the crush of cruelty beneath the blue contrasting the textures how we feel when perversely things go on we need care of emotions that live frozen till warmth of love can be vital
A sparkling poem! fresh, enlivening, having new life projection! Beautiful; D
Well it's a very unique poem, I like how it's conceived