Sunday, June 7, 2009

Sparkling River Comments

Rating: 5.0

The caterpillar’s suctioned feet keep him on a twig
If one should slip, the other feet, hanging there with him
But mossy river rocks I walk are slicker than the dew
If one foot, should come undone, the twig is under too
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Keith Parsons
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John Lyday 07 June 2009

Watch out those rocks are slippery, just like life. Well done.

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Angelic Warrior 07 June 2009

mmmm....that sounds really nice right now...calm relaxing.....a complete separation from humanity.....very well written.....i really wish i could sit by a river right now and just forget the world and its mayhem......beautifully written 10++++: D

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Wojja Fink 07 June 2009

flows nice 'n esay like a river...washing away worries..

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