As he gazed on my face
I saw waves of emotion
rise and crash
in his deep almond eyes
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love for the soulmate and the spells of magic. the best one can express. beautiful poem
Sparkling and captivating as love itself. Love has power to transform magically. Loved the last paragraph most. Thanks for sharing.
Supwrb poem worth reading.Nicely crafted.Thanks for sharing.
How could I not click on the a title like Sparkling Love! ? Beautiful and fresh use of iconic imagery. Love is huge and so should be the scope of your poem. Well done Valsa. Take care. :)
When he whispered to me honeyed words of passion in the enormity of silence I blossomed into a red tulip of love...............................The poem is a thing of beauty, a joy for ever.
Hi, Valsa! A quick visit to your poems is all I have time for this morning. I like this poem because it reminds me of the power of love to lift and transform us. The reference to the butterfly near the end is like an exclamation point to this truth. And this poem interests me because you chose in it not to rhyme. Good to read something of yours! All the best! Glen
A wonderful love poem. Lucky is the man able to make the woman in his life feel this way.
You are growing infectiously romantic as you age. Becoming a river, tulip, symphony, painting and butterfly all in one go. WOW! The reader is star-struck in the end. (10)
As he played on the strings of my heart's violin I got tuned into an alluring symphony Love and all its harmonious feelings brought out from the heart, Thanks for sharing.
A lovely romantic write, beautifully capturing the rush of emotions a lover feels when with the beloved. Stunning imagery. A10
This certainly is one of the best, most original and beautifully descriptive love poems, I have ever read. The love transformations are superb in metamorphosis originality. A truly exceptional work!
O ho ho! What a beautiful love poem! Each verse is sprinkled with intense emotion of love. I can see the stars sparkling in your eyes! :) Valsa! You are truly a love queen! 100
The entire poem is such a paean to love's effect on a woman's loving heart- - - -the closing was perfect in every way a closing can be perfect. When he lifted me up in his arms all the stars came down to see the spark in my eyes wondering if it outdid their combined lustre - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - beautiful enchanted love poem! 10+++++++++++++++++++
Simple and complex, a splendid love poem. I like it very much. Best wishes, Paul Hartal
Wow! I love this outstanding love poem with your great imagination and creativity you have given us readers a feast of love with brilliant imagery and such beautiful tenderness!
Give it and you get back manifold. That is the simple mantra of love. The passion and the feelings have been expressed quite elegantly. The graphic and the poem are made for each other. Thanks. As he played on the strings of my heart's violin...I got tuned into an alluring symphony
Usually Valsa George does not write such love poems, but when she writes she always proves she can write wonderful love poems.
An absolutely brilliant poem! Only one who has experienced love could write such as this, a river joining the current, when he whispered to me honeyed words of passion, in the enormity of silence, I blossomed, stamp my lips the seal of love, just a perfect poem in every way my friend!
A great writting, Valsa.I hope until evening to have translated it.I feel that my language lacks something like that.