Tuesday, October 24, 2017

Sparkling Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

As he gazed on my face
I saw waves of emotion
rise and crash
in his deep almond eyes
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Dimitrios Galanis 20 December 2017

A great writting, Valsa.I hope until evening to have translated it.I feel that my language lacks something like that.

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Glen Kappy 26 November 2017

Nice, Valsa. Ah! love. -Glen

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Muhammad Ali 23 November 2017

love for the soulmate and the spells of magic. the best one can express. beautiful poem

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Savita Tyagi 13 November 2017

Sparkling and captivating as love itself. Love has power to transform magically. Loved the last paragraph most. Thanks for sharing.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 10 November 2017

Supwrb poem worth reading.Nicely crafted.Thanks for sharing.

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Jette Blackstone 07 November 2017

How could I not click on the a title like Sparkling Love! ? Beautiful and fresh use of iconic imagery. Love is huge and so should be the scope of your poem. Well done Valsa. Take care. :)

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Akhtar Jawad 04 November 2017

When he whispered to me honeyed words of passion in the enormity of silence I blossomed into a red tulip of love...............................The poem is a thing of beauty, a joy for ever.

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Glen Kappy 03 November 2017

Hi, Valsa! A quick visit to your poems is all I have time for this morning. I like this poem because it reminds me of the power of love to lift and transform us. The reference to the butterfly near the end is like an exclamation point to this truth. And this poem interests me because you chose in it not to rhyme. Good to read something of yours! All the best! Glen

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Stephen Katona 01 November 2017

A wonderful love poem. Lucky is the man able to make the woman in his life feel this way.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 31 October 2017

You are growing infectiously romantic as you age. Becoming a river, tulip, symphony, painting and butterfly all in one go. WOW! The reader is star-struck in the end. (10)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 31 October 2017

As he played on the strings of my heart's violin I got tuned into an alluring symphony Love and all its harmonious feelings brought out from the heart, Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 October 2017

A lovely romantic write, beautifully capturing the rush of emotions a lover feels when with the beloved. Stunning imagery. A10

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Sandra Feldman 26 October 2017

This certainly is one of the best, most original and beautifully descriptive love poems, I have ever read. The love transformations are superb in metamorphosis originality. A truly exceptional work!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 October 2017

O ho ho! What a beautiful love poem! Each verse is sprinkled with intense emotion of love. I can see the stars sparkling in your eyes! :) Valsa! You are truly a love queen! 100

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Susan Williams 25 October 2017

The entire poem is such a paean to love's effect on a woman's loving heart- - - -the closing was perfect in every way a closing can be perfect. When he lifted me up in his arms all the stars came down to see the spark in my eyes wondering if it outdid their combined lustre - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - beautiful enchanted love poem! 10+++++++++++++++++++

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Paul Hartal 25 October 2017

Simple and complex, a splendid love poem. I like it very much. Best wishes, Paul Hartal

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Hazel Durham 25 October 2017

Wow! I love this outstanding love poem with your great imagination and creativity you have given us readers a feast of love with brilliant imagery and such beautiful tenderness!

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Rajnish Manga 24 October 2017

Give it and you get back manifold. That is the simple mantra of love. The passion and the feelings have been expressed quite elegantly. The graphic and the poem are made for each other. Thanks. As he played on the strings of my heart's violin...I got tuned into an alluring symphony

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Akhtar Jawad 24 October 2017

Usually Valsa George does not write such love poems, but when she writes she always proves she can write wonderful love poems.

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Bill Cantrell 24 October 2017

An absolutely brilliant poem! Only one who has experienced love could write such as this, a river joining the current, when he whispered to me honeyed words of passion, in the enormity of silence, I blossomed, stamp my lips the seal of love, just a perfect poem in every way my friend!

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