Sparkle, Sparkle Little Star! Comments

I am honored and will never forget your kindness! Pens up!

A most neat and enchanting poem. Keep writing Omar for you will get better and better at it. Don't lose hope good sir. 10++ and I wish you well, take care.

Wonderfully beautiful, Omar. I hope you keep on writing poetry.

lovely poem very pretty

Not up to the standard set by some of your other work, try reading the second line aloud and if you can remain objective I think you will notice that it is clumsy, possibly because of straining to rhyme. Enough said, I could mention other faults but feel what's really needed is acomplete re-write.

Great poem it was very sweet This is a unique work make me think about things differently Like when you started talking about the baby holding it's arms out thinking the star was a toy ball Very interesting Very well done

A nice innocence and youthful nice to the poem. I particularly like the 3rd and 4th verse, which has good imagery.

Very nice :) I love the rhyming.

Its a really gorgeous poem Omar :)

good imagery used, Omar. u've a pretty good and talented poetic sense of imagination which is clearly reflected in ur words here... can't comment much on this, its not my genre of poetry anyway keep writin.

An enchanting read. Beautifully written, great imagery! ; D Read my, Stars, might enjoy!

a Lovely poem. The end rhyms of your poem just sparkle. Good write

i don't know if i have read this before but it seems that it is awesome to read again and again... keep writing sir!

‘Shining shining little star Wonder I why you’re far Look and enjoy glitter Wait I’m reaching near.’ ~ niv 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

Magical! ! ! A lucky words for star.

'who can stop your shining bright who can avoid your heat and light' I love this words, they are beautiful.

sparkle, sparkle little star in your vast space in the galaxy very far nothing can mach your beauty and power your face! how pretty! like the face of my flower beautiful imagination with intellegent words and fine execution., , , , u deserve wow...10 read mine... you and me, , , lovely valentine

I'm impressed. How come I can't write like this. sigh. i guess it's all about talent.

Wow, you got talent!

HOLY! U'VE GOT BRAINS HUH! ! !