Spark Comments

some fine imagery....portraying an unforgettable pair of eyes... but when i see them, , , i see a slight sense of vulnerability, that surrenders them completely to you....trustfully.

verses given fine sparkle! 10+

You are gd writer kept it up You are a such an inspiriation

The sparkle in the eye together with the cow took me to the countryside. Deserves a 10.

You penned wondrously an expression vivid of her eyes with a '++spark++'.

your expressions are very good.. that' what I like about your poems, this again is very good.. with love shan

Sparkling similies.... A recent rush of female/woman idolising, Nikunj? ? Whatever. You're in good hands. Cheers. Subroto

yeh that spark from her eye is enough to light a raging fire in your heart good write -10 anjali

Reads well from top to bottom. The last line really was very unexpected! Moooooo! I can hear the clanging of a bell from around the neck of a cow. Very creative and with humor too. DC

A sweet and cheerful country poem. '10! ' Keep writing and sharing with us. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

....to live to stay to roam/till the cows come home...Good imagery.Thanks to the poet, you have touched the feelings of countrymen!

the sparks in her eyes are the light that lighten up the lonely sky the sparks of her love reflects in her eyes touches everybody's hearts, reaches one's dream..

nice similes: ''Tangible as a wish that comes from a heart true; spirited as a dream that lives to come through'' embedded in this wonderful poem......10

Hope the spark remains, lovely poem, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

At times just a small 'spark' is adequate to light a raging fire! 10! -Raj Nandy

a very beautiful poem nikunj ji...loved your expressions....10