Spark Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Spark

Rating: 5.0


Tangible as a wish that comes from a heart true;
spirited as a dream that lives to come through; definite as tomorrow's sun; subtle as friendly fun.
Pleasing as a childish smile staying for a while; ephemeral as a fleeting moment; lively as a flowing current;
the spark of her eye; to live to stay to roam
Till the cows come home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 06 August 2009

your expressions are very good.. that' what I like about your poems, this again is very good.. with love shan

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Subroto Chatterjee 03 August 2009

Sparkling similies.... A recent rush of female/woman idolising, Nikunj? ? Whatever. You're in good hands. Cheers. Subroto

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Anjali Sinha 02 August 2009

yeh that spark from her eye is enough to light a raging fire in your heart good write -10 anjali

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Deborah Cromer 02 August 2009

Reads well from top to bottom. The last line really was very unexpected! Moooooo! I can hear the clanging of a bell from around the neck of a cow. Very creative and with humor too. DC

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Marilyn Lott 30 July 2009

A sweet and cheerful country poem. '10! ' Keep writing and sharing with us. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 22 August 2009

some fine imagery....portraying an unforgettable pair of eyes... but when i see them, , , i see a slight sense of vulnerability, that surrenders them completely to you....trustfully.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 August 2009

verses given fine sparkle! 10+

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Christina Phan 09 August 2009

You are gd writer kept it up You are a such an inspiriation

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Siddharth Singh 09 August 2009

The sparkle in the eye together with the cow took me to the countryside. Deserves a 10.

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Obinna Eruchie 08 August 2009

You penned wondrously an expression vivid of her eyes with a '++spark++'.

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