Tangible as a wish that comes from a heart true;
spirited as a dream that lives to come through; definite as tomorrow's sun; subtle as friendly fun.
Pleasing as a childish smile staying for a while; ephemeral as a fleeting moment; lively as a flowing current;
the spark of her eye; to live to stay to roam
Till the cows come home.
Sparkling similies.... A recent rush of female/woman idolising, Nikunj? ? Whatever. You're in good hands. Cheers. Subroto
yeh that spark from her eye is enough to light a raging fire in your heart good write -10 anjali
Reads well from top to bottom. The last line really was very unexpected! Moooooo! I can hear the clanging of a bell from around the neck of a cow. Very creative and with humor too. DC
A sweet and cheerful country poem. '10! ' Keep writing and sharing with us. Warm Wishes, Marilyn
some fine imagery....portraying an unforgettable pair of eyes... but when i see them, , , i see a slight sense of vulnerability, that surrenders them completely to you....trustfully.
The sparkle in the eye together with the cow took me to the countryside. Deserves a 10.
You penned wondrously an expression vivid of her eyes with a '++spark++'.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
your expressions are very good.. that' what I like about your poems, this again is very good.. with love shan