Friday, September 17, 2010

Spare The Smile Comments

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(Imagine if God tells this to you)

When beauty was yet kept from the eyes of any man
And the masterpiece was yet a Breath of Life away,
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Obed dela Cruz
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Clara Odelia Ciutara 07 July 2011

I really, really love reading this poem. As you wrote in the beginning of the poem, I could imagine as if this poem were really told by God. I love this, Obed :)

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Chitra - 14 October 2010

An excellent mind bender....filled with captivating phrases! !

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Mohammed Albalushi 02 October 2010

Spare the smile and the heart; let them be completely Mine. I will make you own the start you dreamed of possessing i like the experrions and inspiration

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Leah Ayliffe 01 October 2010

your words are inspiring.

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Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

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