Sunday, August 9, 2009

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Rating: 2.5

Spare just a moment for the bird
Who flew from bleak winter of her habitat,
In search of warmth, food wet lands
And green fields, instead only found silt.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Raj Nandy 14 August 2009

By now it is a well established fact, that those exotic birds have become a rare commodity! We rarely sight them in our cities! The sky is filled with black crows and scavenger birds, I too had lamented in a poem I wrote once! For this poem a 10 + -Raj Nandy

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Bob Blackwell 12 August 2009

Mamta, you have a beautiful mind, in your poems you consider all with love. Bird life is diminishing in our greedy concrete world, when they become extinct, it will be our loss. One less beauty in our world. Bob

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Vaibhav Pandey 11 August 2009

what a beautiful poem ma'm....very heartfelt and touching...10+

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Rakesh Bedi 09 August 2009

I think it is an experience of poet on revisiting someplace; descibed through the emotions of a bird? I dont know, mamta, this is what i gathered (correct me if i am wrong, plz) . Yes, it does its job beautifully!

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Sandra Martyres 09 August 2009

Beautiful thoughts expressed about the destruction of nature and the fate of the birds....great write Mamta

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