Sunday, February 12, 2006

Spanning The Unfathomable Gulf Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like the lonely sun,
passionately longing
to kiss the man in the moon,
she, the bookworm,
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William Jackson
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***** ********* 23 February 2006

It becomes natural William. Beautiful poem and loves reach, so perfectly described. 10 from expert twinkler Tai

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Mary Naylor 17 February 2006

This is an imaginative poem. I like the uncontorted flow of language, and the colorful imagery. It's one of those poems I enjoy reading outloud.

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Duncan Wyllie 12 February 2006

Dear William. The untouchable may have just been touched upon.Thankyou for this great piece.Love Duncan

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 12 February 2006

There's nothing like the need of wanting to share a love that's fresh, new and exciting! Nice work. I enjoyed the images you depicted. Thanks. Lawrence

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William Jackson

William Jackson

San Antonio, Texas
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