Like the lonely sun,
passionately longing
to kiss the man in the moon,
she, the bookworm,
...
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This is an imaginative poem. I like the uncontorted flow of language, and the colorful imagery. It's one of those poems I enjoy reading outloud.
Dear William. The untouchable may have just been touched upon.Thankyou for this great piece.Love Duncan
There's nothing like the need of wanting to share a love that's fresh, new and exciting! Nice work. I enjoyed the images you depicted. Thanks. Lawrence
It becomes natural William. Beautiful poem and loves reach, so perfectly described. 10 from expert twinkler Tai