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you made my life clear and joyous.... that's what i felt in you poem...you got the good warning men...thank you and God bless...a 10/10

Hi, Devontae. I read all of your poems to understand your style, your point of view, and I have say that they are impressive. You are minimalist in the way you choose your language; I noticed you use cultural perspectives as well, like the poem above. The rythm, vocabulary choice, and imagery are great. However, in some poems, you risk sounding a bit infantile because they are too simply put. All in all, I think you did a good job. Keep it up and good luck with everything.