My Love is standing at the door
requesting to come in,
and so the space behind the door
is full once more.
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I'm sure I know what you mean... I'm just not sure you said it as well as you intended. Doors are metaphors, and you have used it methaphorically, but the imagery is more consistent with a heart. Intriguing!
i really like this imagery, the door, the closings and openings, just like the heart in love...i like it alot-alexzia