Friday, July 22, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

There is a new force
an excitement stirring
inside me...childlike...
I'm a child to the loving,
...
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Jeanne Fiedler
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 July 2011

Excellent poem with a lot of depth. Fine and vivid imagery. The poem has a strong structure. I like and rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Thanks in advance. Warm regards Akmal

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