So bright this magical sight
At this never sleeping night
Yet dark but as you look you see light
Swirling before your wondering mind
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So bright and magical a sight on this pitch black night yet there glimmers a faint light in far-off space - one star bright! Let me wander alone in dark night looking for another such sight in southern skies - look! a light a shooting star lighting up night! ********************************************* You're improving, Nick!
wow..... nice poem its beautifully critical nice job