Friday, June 13, 2008

Spa For The Brain Comments

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writing a poetry
is putting together
scintillating vibes
of words that have
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john tiong chunghoo
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Simone Inez Harriman 16 November 2015

A clever poem John. A poem can be created by a spa of words such as these....10

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Raynette Eitel 13 June 2008

I really like this idea, John, but this needs work with some of the syntax. I'll write you about what I see here...but what a marvelous idea...a 'spa for the brain.' Very creative! Raynette

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