Monday, September 17, 2012

Sowing A Seed Comments

Rating: 4.5

I smile when I'm happy.
I do it even in public.
I was doing it
when a man and his wife came up to me.
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Jazib Kamalvi 16 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Zarina. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 September 2012

A giggling fine n fun poem. Im all smiles now. Do read mine

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Indranil Bhaduri 17 September 2012

A different approach of conversation gives it a new angle. Lovely.

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Thomas Hsi 17 September 2012

I like the conversational exchange too! I'm glad the narrator was mature enough to realize that another person's negativity isn't worth refusing to sow a seed. Thanks for sharing.

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