Saturday, November 4, 2017

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You're big bad,
Awaken the feeling of love in itself
You are crying now.
You're a fool,
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Rahul Shil
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Payal Debnath 09 January 2018

Your poem is so satire..... I vote you 10+++++++

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Rini Shibu 04 November 2017

Well constructed poem about violent society.

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Rahul Shil 08 November 2017

Yes.....I wrote this poem about violent of society...... In fact, I have always found trouble and sadness from this society. There is no tune of living here. So, writing this poem is a vilification on this society. Thank you for comment my dear poet Rini.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2017

You are a fool if you cry by the harsh realities of life.. your distractions will find thousand ways to make you cry, forgot and forgive..! An excellent poem dear poet, I liked it...10

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Rahul Shil 06 November 2017

In fact, I have always found trouble and sadness from this society. There is no tune of living here. So, writing this poem is a vilification on this society. Thanks for comment and report and vote.Thanks my dear..... I like u too.

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Rahul Shil

Rahul Shil

Mirza, Udaipur, Gomati, Tripura
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