Kicked on beach cockle shells
then the office guys to hell
the prickly sand tickles my toes
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I think it's an ode to a girl who is self-assertive and smart and does not like to act coyly. It's written with a feeling of respect for all working girls to keep their morale high. A perfect ten for such a serious at the bottom but written with a light pen composition.
sovereign girl, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
it is seemed to me a funny poem.. but nice with smooth flow and sweet rhymes.. love it.....2
Hmm i dont know whether u r praisin or despisin dat girl here but i give u kudos for d rhymin flow. As for me i tink beautiful workin women r waylaid easily so they shud b careful.