Souvenir Comments

This poem has a goldmine of thoughts in just about every line- -no, I reread it, it has a goldmine of thoughts in every single line. And I like how you expressed them in new and novel ways- -for example, Life is a complex process / Negotiating for progress..... and...... Often life too takes breaks / Rejuvenating all that was expended.. 10++

Progress of life! ! To dress up with the truth! ! ! ! And to address your mind with righteous laws. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

In me I feel I'm true Of life Complexity is nothing Growing growing and growing Past is past, but present is everything