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As I sat on my desk,
Hurrying with my pent up work,
A scrap of paper, left uncared,
Clumsily scrawled by tender hands,
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The innocent smile fading from your lips, In a coffin, amid wailing friends and kin, Like a vanishing dream, you lay. In deep quiet, your body reposed, Unmindful of everything around......so impressive and heart touching expression. Losing a young daughter in accident for a bereaved mother is really painful and a great shock. You have so touchingly and heartrendingly inscribed this poem. Beautiful one.
A very impressive and heart touching poem, how great are the hearts who feel pain of others! A nice poem that can make any eyes wet if a human eyes........10
Very sad. Condolences. My prayer is that this mother be comforted and somehow find the strength to go on.
The sad event superbly narrated. I could very well visualize the pain of the mother at times I could even identify myself with her. May the soul of departed rest in peace.
brought tears to my eyes... god bless the child and console the mother...
A heartbreaking write, such a wonderful thought to record a poem such as this when words can never describe the sadness of a tragedy as this one, so well done.
I was invited for a friend to read your poem. I had to stop and, some minutes, i return. Heartbroken poem! ! ! Lindo! !
The dismal happenings have the power to inflict deep cuts on our minds finer than flesh. The poem traces the tragedy that crushed the little one and wets our eyes all alike. Poems of the kind are inevitable to begin a search for the discerning lot who are just a few perhaps.
The mournful tragedy portrayed with such intensity is a monumental rendition.It tore my heart.Even long after finishing reading I couldn't compose myself. Tears were rolling down.My heart-felt condolences to the bereaved mother.THANKS & REGARDS.
A very moving and compassionate tribute for a loss no one ever wants to experience, but some sadly will. A fine sensitive poem, deftly crafted.
How excruciatingly sad, beyond all words. I will give you a 10 for such a great dedication, but voting somehow seems facile and inappropriate.
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9/6/2025 8:24:04 AM # 1.0.0
A beautiful work dear madam! I find your works so fascinating rich with feelings, emotions and prudent imaginations! I love your poetry (Poetess Magadha)
Thank you so much Magadha for your words of encouragement. This was written out of my intense feelings for a mother who happened to be my close friend who had lost her daughter in an accident. That child was everybody's darling. So the emotions came naturally!