Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Southern Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shy sand grain
languorously lying beneath breeze-touched palm tree
hungry and thirsty.
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Michelle Kafka
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Louis Rams 18 January 2010

a beautiful sensuous poem very well written, thank you for sharing

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Michelle Kafka 14 January 2010

Thank you for your responses.

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Marieta Maglas 13 January 2010

wonderful visual metonymy Shared silken vocal ranges amid pink and red décor. wonderful lyric poem belonging to symbolism 10/10

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Afzal Shauq 12 January 2010

sweet way written rich and meaningful poem is this one...enjoyed a lot...10/10

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Lynn Glover 12 January 2010

A very sensual poem, I enjoyed the read very much, 'thanks your poem pal Lynn

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Michelle Kafka

Michelle Kafka

Manitoba, Canada
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