What ecstasy you've got into
Tumbling home, me and all you do
Frisky sometimes in perfect rhyme
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Great rhyming couplets written........nature bound and inspiration with the season breeze...soothing piece with your nice poetic pictorial...10+++
dear indira....so much nostalgia....you brought bacck cherished memories of childhood amd of the village long gone past....those simple days and innocent forrays... superb ode to the monsoon plethora....the ambiense...the colors and the dynamism in our part of the world...monsoon is it, , that starts the year very nice cheers
aadi kathu...yes mam it is a solace in summer..the poem rocks with the wind...a lovely write mam
Summer solace you are my friend Soothing mercy o' you abound ...nice, free flowing poem...liked it...