Saturday, February 20, 2016

South African White Rhino Comments

Rating: 5.0

South African treasure
Wide mouth and crashing
A suffocating hot oppressive sun
Statue still, slowly stirring
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Edmund Strolis
COMMENTS
Sarah Persson 07 March 2016

You bring the Rhino to life in exquisite detail, The picture you drew is a brilliant work of art. Extraordinary talent.

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Pamela Sinicrope 20 February 2016

WOW Edmund. I like your poem AND especially love your sketch. You are uniquely talented. There is such expression in the Rhino portrait. I like the shading as well as the detail in the skin. I love the line 'dusty mountain moving.' Well done.

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