~ Sousedouse Dipdouse ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
~ Sousedouse Dipdouse ~
Humble submission:
[Rabindranath Tagore (RNT) at old age wrote many romantic poems / songs on Ashrama Balika [hermitage girls] …here I’ve made a paradigm shift…
In UK I watch at ‘closeangle’ the voidness of many retired widowmen …they’ve pension and other amenities…but voidness in mind…eagering heart to get solace…psychic… from someone… and my empathic sharing … it led me to portray this poem ~ niv]
~ SOUSEDOUSE DIPDOUSE ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
December 21,2009.
In your twilightage
Lay heart for caresses
Discover fluffy edge
Glide with my psychic sledge.
Age no bar,
Stupid number
I fie phew blunt blunder.
My risingsun age
‘Keep no haze’
Discover my crazeamaze.
Why otiose frown
Hey beau Hon
Cuddle nuzzle
Why fumble
In me be nimble.
Lay pink bosoms’ carpets
Listen love euphony
Snuggles n’ gyrates.
Dame Jane is not
Will-o’-the-wisp
But red nip
Sip n’ sozzled n’ sip.
No go not
Close n’ abut
Knit love knot.
Sky seeking sleep
O’ John race heart’s beep
Just a buss in silence
Eurekaize my elegance.
Your adrenalite agitated inn
Soothe in my emotive endorphin.
Come in hey John
Jane waiting in bedecks
Marvel aqua mansion
Sousedouse dipdowse
Bask doting physiquedawn.
Dame Jane is morning roses
For twilightage John
E’er nears n’ closes.
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Finest love poem with twilightage and risingsun age well blended and in romantic flavor… Poetically not ‘mismatched’…in reality…? Definite 10+ Dr. V. PS Note Humble Submission...and it is the 'The spot' of the poem...
‘Young Jane laid fullheart Without any if and but Straight and curt For old John a fresh start. What I understood about the Poem and empathicoromantic [empathic + romantic] Poem it is… enjoyed it to the lees 10++
Like fairytale … offbeat romance …may come true in numbers some day... ‘…Dame Jane is not // Will-o’-the-wisp // But red nip // Sip n’ sozzled n’ sip…’ Wonderful lines… gritty and palpable… 10+++
Nivedita You are an exquisite weaver of words.The comments on your poems get me closer to their meaning.But I would someday write a poem like yours and present it to you. Continue surprising us with your enigmaticmagnetic esoteric poetry.
‘SOUSEDOUSE DIPDOUSE’ nice word coupling … styling-titling Appeal is just and help is must…thanks Poet for such gesture We find for oldies poet delved deep into their inside ….of there solitariness and old age voidness ….straight appeal, ‘Eurekaize my elegance’ Wow! ! Dame Jane is morning roses/For twilightage John/E’er nears n’ closes….words of great assurance …thanks 10+
It was a poem that was very hard for me to understand, but after reading it twice it began to come across. Thanks for the invite niv a good poem. Lynn
‘…Your adrenalite agitated inn/Soothe in my emotive endorphin…’ Adrenaline is sympathomimatic and Endorphin [brains own luller] Poet’s observation on widowmen is very right….psychic voidness they suffer from… And very romantically young damsel leniently as extra bonanza loved to share romance to fill the voidness Indeed a paradigm shift 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/21/2025 11:44:21 AM # 1.0.0
It is very touchy poem…recent news accounts for that ~ Celeb Liz Taylor [late seventies on wheel chair] for 9th time going to marry a man in late forties…what poet anticipated and in celebs it is common… And common in commons too …her eyes are very penetrating and heart is very feeling Excellent poem thanks Ma’am 10+++