Friday, September 1, 2006

Sour Wine Comments

Rating: 5.0

The virgin dolly bird sings in her vineyard
and the virtuoso listen her arrogant melody
at his cottage window merrily.
The old rusty fence isn't a barrier it seems
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nimal dunuhinga
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Sandra Fowler 01 September 2006

The tone of this poem is a bit fatatalistic and world weary. But it is very well written, Nimal. Kind regards, Sandra

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