Sour Were Those Grapes! Comments

This one is really wonderful, Geetha.Your narrative technique is neat and touches the heart!

Geetha, the way you accept victory and defeat is just enviable! You don; t care even if you fail to reach the target! What harm is there in trying! This should be our attitude to life!

sometimes targets are hard to reach. but we must keep on trying. nice work

A great poem, we can only be as good as we are, our best should be enough.

Chance is before us; to do to our best our duty.Rest is to God.Karmaney vadhikarasthe /Ma bhaleshu kathachana: (do our duty; rest leave to God.so says Lord Krishna to Arjuna, My poem Ode to Rioters is the one I have submitted to International competition of this site.

story of fox if unreach its sour we must try and try and never give up but sour of grapes I dont like a fools call the fox thank you