Friday, July 13, 2018

Sour Grapes? Comments

Rating: 5.0

There once lived some grapes who hadn't much ambition
except to survive by the heat of a fire

then came the day when one grape was sick of the fire
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Vincent LeVine
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Practicing Poetess 26 July 2018

Imaginative, humourous, with a sad kernel of truth hidden in the poem. Very well-written. Deserves to be rated!

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 July 2018

but when the raisin stood up to leave for the sunlight not one grape moved from the fire to wish him farewell and so he left for the last time, to find a home in the sunlight to live amongst raisins rather than the grapes he thought he knew best..... very fine figurative way of presentation....... moving on. and it happens all the time.. very fine poem. you have literary talent dear poet. tony

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Irfanulla Shariff 13 July 2018

A very thought provoking work of great connotation! Well done! Thanks for sharing. Keep writing…

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Vincent LeVine

Vincent LeVine

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