Friday, November 14, 2008

Sour Dough Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sour Dough (for my great grandmother, Icie)

Mottled, repulsive
Thin, cotton, flowery day dress
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Eloisa Gearhart
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Janice Windle 28 February 2009

This is a powerful portrait, without sentimentality. I like the way you have explored your memory's image of your Great-grandmother so particularly. Your work is very strong.

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so sweet i miss my grandma so much this is such a nice and sweet poem.. Krista

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