Oh you precious flower,
Sadness can certainly be undone
With faith and eyes swelled up with tears,
Keep reaching for the sun
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Simply Endless Stars! ..............................+++++++++++++
Absolutely breathtaking! .. Ever such beauty, heart and soul! .. Oh so moving! .. Beyond 5 Stars! ... And then! .................+++++++++++
A lullaby whispering in your ears, Each one casting its special charm, To minimize your fears......captivating poetic expression! A magnificent piece of poetry. I wish you a happy, healthy and productive new year 2021. For this beautiful poem....5 stars.
I tried to reply on your comment Susan but the site won’t let me, I am overwhelmed that you like this poem, you are always so generous and go out of the way to commend ones...I am ever grateful.....thank you! ! ! !
Susan said everything I felt about the poem when I first read it Bill. It is a magical write that will be in my pillowcase every night! Thank you! xoxo
I have to, I just have to- - I am going to print this out and place it beside my bed where I can reach out and read it when I am having yet another sleepless torment of a night
Part 4- -I could go on and on about this poem but so many of your poems are jewels of the heart so I am going to put it in my fav list and read it often, dear friend, and give it a million trillion 10's and may PoemHunters select this wonderful poem as Poem of the Day/Year/Century/All Time
Part Three- - - > > A pillow wet with hopelessness, / Has no place left for dreams / Place this poem inside of it, / Then try to get some sleep / For I have filled it full of soundscapes, / To set your heart at ease. < - - - - - You did., you did! ! !
Part 2- - There is no finding a favorite verse when a poem flows from line to line carrying sensitive words and images unbroken and always building to more and more - -but these especially touched me and brought tears to my eyes because I know you understand the human heart in its courage and in its frailty- -
Soundscapes- -Part One- -I came flying to such a lovely sounding title like a hummingbird scenting sweetness. That is Bill Cantrell for you- -brings you in with a siren song of a title and then you are caught up in the magic of his verse.
Fill your pillow and have sweet dreams... great expression! A marvelous poem. Top score! !