Sounds Of Silence...2207-2k13 Comments

a standard poem...composed immaculately! ! !

Absolutely impeccable. I adored (silence that clings to a Florentine fog) . Such a scrummy line. Tyvm karen

Have you ever heard in your mind the sounds that silence makes... Often silence is unbearable. Silence prevails when sound ends. Thank you for a beautiful poem.

Very thought provoking composition, each line is filled with deep philosophy. You have painted some very romantic scenes too, kudos! some lines happened to me when I read your poem... 'I have heard the silences that speak loud When we are alone in the noisy crowd The silence in the eyes and words unsaid The silence that rests deep down in the soul Stormier than the strongest storms that roll'....

Injecting fresh essence in your new work..maybe a new adopted flower fragrance cure the tiredness of last line? So great to welcome that..refreshing like splashing dew on face! _Soul