The sounds of the coal trucks,
On the old steam train,
Late at night,
I heard the clatter,
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A great poem! Full of sensational sounds and smells! It makes me think of the little community that I grew up in! Thank you always for an excellent message!
More gremlins with PH, I can only read two lines of your poem, but you'll get 5* as they're always good. I always have trouble with PoemHunter.
Yes I'm having the same problem. Don't normally have trouble with it x
Beautiful poem, Mrs Davies! ! ! Excellent rhyme and descriptions! ! ! You truly have the ability to transport your readers to a whole other reality : )