Wednesday, January 9, 2019

Sounds And Scenes I Like And Not Comments

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I like the silent sound of early dawn,
Not quite the dusk dashing in a hurry—
Before you say good bye, she's nigh but gone,
Dawns linger on amidst my dream's flurry.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 January 2019

I agree with KUMARAMANI SIR JI

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 January 2019

Silence sound of early dawn has great motivational force and it deeply impacts life. Beautiful sound is felt very well. Stagnant water in city pleases none of human being. You have beautifully perceived nature and rain. An excellent poem is well penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 January 2019

You're right, man is filled with a lot of likes and dislikes, and thank you for the feedback.

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