Sound
depends
on the heart
where my truth lives
from alone mountain comes out as fountain;
Hoary smoke from the ice berg of red heart
where mind befriends
the wise pen
to write
Words
15.06.2020 Chattogram (Double Tetractys)
The wise pen! Ink of wisdom. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Marvelous thoughts versified. Cleverly conveyed and crafted.
Beautiful thought, nicely penned. Sound needs words and words need sound.
from (red heart) > the kingdom of knowledge the (ice berg) > poetic creativity comes (hoary smoke) > slow and steady like the ice flame and make cool the readers… nice urdu like reading...right to leftwards.... great mb of bd thanks
Explicit poetic expression of words that fountain like a pen captivating the sound heart witheld. Beautiful work.
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I would like to translate this poem
Hoary smoke from the ice berg of red heart////////........> > > > > > > > > > > nice GEM as per below poet hope it is not like makhan only but this line flies above my head only can you elucidate kindly o great mb of bd
Hoary smoke from the ice berg of red heart" from (red heart) > the kingdom of knowledge the (ice berg) > poetic creativity comes (hoary smoke) > slow and steady like the ice flame and makes cool the readers….......by me! ! ! !