Monday, March 26, 2018

Sound Silence Comments

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And I picked a sky
sewed on the path nobody passed for a single time

The wet night is drawing the timid birth
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Nilima Deb
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Jazib Kamalvi 19 June 2020

Write comment. Beautiful poetry, Nilima Deb. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 March 2018

And Nilima, your write- : : I have none to replace the gravity : : Vivified : : rather than the sum of two young lights : : X well defines X+Y …. Yes, everything is a sum of two, even gravity. It is not just about love. It is the ability to discern this fact(that X defines X+Y) that makes our life worth living.. Remarkable.

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 March 2018

Hi Nilima, An abstract poem of the post-modern genre. Of course, brevity is the hall mark of your poetry. Drawing on the images from night/dawn, muse/silence, loneliness/togetherness with nature you have been able to build the poem a very high aesthetic regime. Loved it. Your Lines- : : A bottle of moonlight couldn't ease the silences Until you untied: : great poetic craft!

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Nilima Deb 03 May 2018

thank you so much for your greatt creative comments. All my pleasure.

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