Sound Of Your Footsteps Comments

That’s how when the birds tweet Moving sound of the falling leaves Heralding your arrival sweet Nice words....beautifully written.....good to read.

attractive words describe sweet footsteps! nice nice!

well expressed emotions....nice poem....10

Hi Baswat, yes I agree with the other readers about the feelings expressed, but it seems to me a bit lacking depth and pathos. It sounds to me like a nice lullaby. I do not know the original Bengali poem and therefore cannot judge. Is it meant to be written for children? Enea

Great write, sir. Enjoyed it!

well translated.. your footsteps are signs that ur here whether it is tiptoed or pirouette my heart beats fast and my hands tremble might it's really you who owns that steps..

A beautiful translation Bhaswat....the reader can feel you passion and longing as you wait for the return of your loved one...10

wow a very nice composition well expressed...fine diction and rhymes...such a beautiful translation.........10

Anticipation is the longing, and the passionate waiting, the yearning for the beloved to return to once again fill a loving heart with even more love. Using the footsteps as a metaphor brings sound into this poem has given it another dimension. Lovely writing. 10 love Karin

That’s how when the birds tweet Moving sound of the falling leaves Heralding your arrival sweet are clues that my heart believes Days go by, the nights pass Your thoughts ….just outpass A very beautiful translation..well done.

I like the way you describe the feeling of the waiting period even better when almost over...nice! !

Nicely penned the feelings..................

The enormous desire, the waiting, the patience, and the great joy of seeing the loved one arriving once again....which translate into Love and Happiness, great job, keep it up, you got my 10+, Love and Peace, Romeo

It shows the deep love one has eagerly waiting to hear the footsteps of the beloved one coming closer to the heart.

Beautiful celebrations for reunion. CP

A very good greeting to your loved one. Nice Write. Lynn

A heartfelt piece Bhaswat...beautifully penned.10

A heart felt love gentle poem for the one in your heart nice to read with thanks regards

'My heart is your regal throne You are my highest need My celebrations have nubile grown around you, my sacred meed' These are very strong emotions indeed sir.. great.. I like the expressions and imagery you have used here... very good.. great write...10 with love shan

Short but deep and lovely, tks for sharing