After rain stream is fully flowing,
Dancing in lands and hill top of hope,
Autumn stream is clear like silver grass,
Beauty is perceived in way of journey.
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We hear the great sound of water. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.
Towards Salvation! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I like how you handled this topic- - -in fact, the poem is an exposition of beauty, nature, spirituality. Stream is doing exercise in open gym, Both physically and mentally in light, Remaining fit and doing service is nice, Stream has understood selfless service.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I love the sense of humor in this stanza! ! ! Water stream is flowing and glowing, This is glowing into golden in a flow, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - You grabbed me there- -I love plating with words and playing with the sounds of words and playing with the rhymes of words I love this poem! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++
Write comment. A charming song of nature could be heard in this poem. Thanks
Soft sound of water stream motivates mind. Benevolent soul rightly takes astral journey. God has given power to have this journey. He has given wisdom. This poem is very lovely and you are a nice poet.