Tuesday, August 19, 2008

Sound Of Silence - In Top 500 Comments

Rating: 5.0

The morning dawns,
with the pellucid rosy tint on the buds,
The rustle of the perfunctory cool breeze, .
awakens the birds and the bees.
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ANJALI SINHA
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Ken E Hall 29 March 2012

Natures silence written as it is...the twitter of the birds my favourite daily sound, fodder for your perfect pen very nice to read ++++10 regards

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Ken E Hall 29 March 2012

Listen, to the whispers and the twitters of the birds, for me the best line I breakfast every morning on the garden patio and your vision of natures silence is spot on...++++10...regards

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If silence speaks so eloquently then let every word be forever hushed. Well done my excellent friend! 100/10

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Ravi Sathasivam 02 December 2009

The beauty of the silence is expressed with great skill here. Wonderful poem. Well penned Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Anand Madhukar 19 October 2009

An exquisite piece, Anjali. Opulent with imagery and painting the day and its end with a beautiful palette of colours.

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Anju Addanki 17 September 2009

That was a wonderful one. I wonder how u get such nice ones. i need to learn a lot form u. U r indeed a great poet

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Sandra Martyres 28 July 2009

An exquisite piece of poetry Anjali 10+++

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Ted M 26 July 2009

The sound of silence as the sun sets, the twinkling stars in the clear sky, the peace; esp., when its the countryside with vast areas of greenery is a beautiful sight. You create a nice picture in the mind of the reader and now I long for that peaceful environment.

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romantic beautiful images and whispers...a very warm poem.....

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Pranav Gothic 10 July 2009

amazing selection of words which are beautifully painted..10+

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Afzal Shauq 04 July 2009

The vacuous firmament is dimming, The effulgent sun is descending, The esoteric moon is peeping slowly, And the lustrous stars are out in rows. sure... silence has its own tongue to talk.. as the eyes have ear to hear, .. heart to feed and soul to eat... yes i believe..and loved your idea.. its pure iamgery one..poetis style.. melodic flow.. meaningful..but your words also are being felt to breath, and your words to make colorful pictures..thats why... i say you are a poetess of colorful words..10+++++++++

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Goran Gustafsson 11 June 2009

Blessed is she/he who can hear the sound of silence

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Yannis Voultos 22 May 2009

Representational icons, excellent vocabulary

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Yelena M. 31 March 2009

A truly Great work here. 'Listen, to the whispers and the twitters of the birds, Nestling homewards bound, Hear, the gentle velocity of the waters of the rivulet, Swirling there a dance' - this is a perfect melody. Best wishes. A.

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the picture you gave though silent had a lovely melody coming from within the reader..and that melody would put me to sleep too...no words

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Duh Huh 20 March 2009

Vivid images and sounds. Wonderful write, keep up the good work. :)

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Mahfooz Ali 15 March 2009

Yes! sound of silence is traverse........... and has countless decibels........... to bang on..............

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this piece wrapped me in a combus cloud and floated me in aww.. i love

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 17 December 2008

'Opening up, my dormant buds in full bloom.' wow! ! ! ! loved this poem, anjali. amazing.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 13 November 2008

humble and refreshing! keep writing! could you read and comment on my poems too, specially the new ones? Thank you.

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