The morning dawns,
with the pellucid rosy tint on the buds,
The rustle of the perfunctory cool breeze, .
awakens the birds and the bees.
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Listen, to the whispers and the twitters of the birds, for me the best line I breakfast every morning on the garden patio and your vision of natures silence is spot on...++++10...regards
If silence speaks so eloquently then let every word be forever hushed. Well done my excellent friend! 100/10
The beauty of the silence is expressed with great skill here. Wonderful poem. Well penned Enjoyed reading it 10+
An exquisite piece, Anjali. Opulent with imagery and painting the day and its end with a beautiful palette of colours.
That was a wonderful one. I wonder how u get such nice ones. i need to learn a lot form u. U r indeed a great poet
The sound of silence as the sun sets, the twinkling stars in the clear sky, the peace; esp., when its the countryside with vast areas of greenery is a beautiful sight. You create a nice picture in the mind of the reader and now I long for that peaceful environment.
romantic beautiful images and whispers...a very warm poem.....
The vacuous firmament is dimming, The effulgent sun is descending, The esoteric moon is peeping slowly, And the lustrous stars are out in rows. sure... silence has its own tongue to talk.. as the eyes have ear to hear, .. heart to feed and soul to eat... yes i believe..and loved your idea.. its pure iamgery one..poetis style.. melodic flow.. meaningful..but your words also are being felt to breath, and your words to make colorful pictures..thats why... i say you are a poetess of colorful words..10+++++++++
A truly Great work here. 'Listen, to the whispers and the twitters of the birds, Nestling homewards bound, Hear, the gentle velocity of the waters of the rivulet, Swirling there a dance' - this is a perfect melody. Best wishes. A.
the picture you gave though silent had a lovely melody coming from within the reader..and that melody would put me to sleep too...no words
Yes! sound of silence is traverse........... and has countless decibels........... to bang on..............
this piece wrapped me in a combus cloud and floated me in aww.. i love
'Opening up, my dormant buds in full bloom.' wow! ! ! ! loved this poem, anjali. amazing.
humble and refreshing! keep writing! could you read and comment on my poems too, specially the new ones? Thank you.
Natures silence written as it is...the twitter of the birds my favourite daily sound, fodder for your perfect pen very nice to read ++++10 regards