Friday, May 15, 2009

Sound Of Music Comments

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I was depressed and sad
I took a walk down the street
searching for solace
i heard the sound
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lewis Adheks
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Joseph Poewhit 09 July 2009

Makes a song of life's music

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Chitra - 07 July 2009

the sonorous rhythm of this beautiful poem has touched my heart

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Oneline Poet 02 June 2009

If words were music you have created a symphony.

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Kimbaline Navas 28 May 2009

You have expressed yourself with the melody of words… This is a perfect picture on a hot summer day, hitting the drums with all of you might and let you make the sounds with your words.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 28 May 2009

A wonderful remembrance of yesterday!

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Yannis Voultos 18 May 2009

The second strophe by itself is a fantastic poem Well – done

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 May 2009

very fine-flowing write... words smoothly combined in a lovely narration... refreshing and soothing words... 10++

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