Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Sound Of A Stream I Hear Comments

Rating: 5.0

At this new age morning
Of this light filled day
I hear sound of a stream
It is dancing in cheer.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2016

In cheer! With the wisdom of life. Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 13 January 2016

Wonderful........................... I hear again it is singing With beautiful reflection The life is nourished well It is having nectar within.

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Nishi Kumari 13 January 2016

when there is emptiness in the heart..the running water breaks the silence...nice work

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Kelly Kurt 13 January 2016

The sound of running water is somehow comforting

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Ratnakar Mandlik 12 January 2016

A marvelous poem with a beautiful flight of imagery and adroitly penned too. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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